I love your other stories - but I don't get this at all! The story seems so disconnected, and it doesn't make any sense!   It's like a bunch of random scenes, but the only connection are the names of the characters - there is no flow.  Just wanted you to know they at least I'm not following it at all... 

Please update soon i cant wait to read more!

What is the huge chunk of spanish after the story?  It kind of looks like an advertisment?

what the heck?

I was wondering if she could turn others or something...so is she gonna kill him or make him suffer her half-life?

totally impressed and happy that she kicked his butt...bet it's annoying his inner beast something awful...either that or impressing it.

how old is she anyway? I mean is she older then Sesshomaru?

definitely good update!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

So dark, yet so awesome. Awesome not in the 21st century way but in the awesomly amazing way. This is intreging and I will be back for the next chapter, hopefully, soon.

Hmm, interesting. I look forward to seeing what will develop.