I know it has been a long time but I'd love to read more. Your plot intrigues me.
This is one of the best fics I've ever read. I've read as many as I could find and there were some especially good ones, but this is right at the top. I think I like it the best of all of them.
Your writing is superb, as well as your development of characters - especially the original ones. You've integrated them seamlessly into the story. It's almost 6:30 in the morning! I should've been in bed hours ago, but I couldn't stop reading. I think I was starting to lose focus due to sleep depravation at the end - I'll have to come back and read through the later chaptesr again to refresh everything.
I was reading some of your author's notes...I'm sorry to hear about life's troubles and wish you well. I'm immensely glad that you have continued this story despite it. It would be a shame for it to go unfinished because it truly is a great piece of writing and with a very compelling story. Well thought out and executed.
Take care,
Kaasan
| OMG!! I just started reading this story a few days ago and I just love it!!! The prologue just pulled me in and I couldnt stop reading until I finished, but unfortunately life doesnt wait for me... lol! But I cant wait to see what you dish up next!!
Zyren (too lazy to login) (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
| ok so it is by your fault and your fault alone that i have gotten absolutely nothing accomplished at work today. i was actually snippy on the phone when some peasant dared call and interrupt my readings of this fic. the nerve of them expecting me to do work while at work!! LOL! i must say, despite the initial confusion (yes the fact that 50 years had passed and yet you were not describing Kagome with wrinkles and gray hair threw me for a big loop) i am greatly enjoying this fic. It is wonderfully written, the timing is appropriate nothing is being rushed (i do so hate when authors rush things). there is a considerable amount of action that is well written and paints a good picture (im a visual person and im sure you've seen that some people just cannot write action scenes, so yours are refreshing). your overall plot is original and enticing, very intricate which i like, especially since everything is not explained at once but unfolds rather nicely. oh! and i greatly enjoy your "behind the scenes" commentary! this is a really great fic and i look forward to the next chapter! :)
Zyren
emmaren (Chapter 15) - Tue 06 Jan 2009
| excellent. i think you presented everything as clearly as possible in this chapter. i look forward to the next chapter. keep it up :D
Wow! That was a fantastic chapter! It seems you hae done some research for it and all! I loved it XD
And I was ecstatic when I saw you had updated!I hope you're having happy holidays XD
Dewa mata
| -Hands a strawberry stuffed muffin and a smoking cup of coffee to exhausted muse, steps away silently and closes the door- AAAArgh!! I can't wait to know what hapens next! This story is really good hun, you're doing a marvelous job -thumbs up- Dewa mata
Jessica (Chapter 12) - Mon 11 Aug 2008
| Great chapter! Although, Kagome actually believing she could kill Sesshoumaru, who is immune to just about all forms of purification, is the biggest joke ever. Even though he was rather violent with her that part where he was playing with her was a good scene.
| Wow. Um, does epic cover it? Don't think so. It's sweeping, intense and beautifully detailed. Your style and characterizations are top notch. And with that last cliffhanger, I'm definitely dangling in suspense!
| Hey lass! Good chapter, as always. Glad your muse is back, I hope her sunburns are not too painful, although I surmise you could call that a punishment for having abandoned her writer to the throes of "The Block". Anyway, glad to see your inspiration is back, it means we'll have more of that awesome writing of yours ^_^ Dewa mata
| *pants for more* I love finding treasures like this story! It's rich and entertaining. The characters are real and believable. I'm awestruck
knifethrower (Chapter 5) - Thu 24 Jul 2008
| I love this fic, but Kikyo was always so smug and superior, I have a hard time with her giggling with Kagome and rolling her eyes. Though I've seen her portrayed this way in many fanfics, I can't see her becoming so different, even if she has the life she had always wanted.
knifethrower (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Jul 2008
| I hope Inuyasha feels very guilty on some level, and that's why he's so oppressive to Kagome.
knifethrower (Chapter 7) - Thu 24 Jul 2008
| My husband tried to keep me from reading the last chapters of the manga, but I finally couldn't bear it and succumbed to temptation. The end doesn't spoil anything you might have imagined or have planned for your fanfics. Sesshomaru's reaction (the look on his face) when he sees Kagome with Inuyasha together at the village appeared pretty ticked off. It was darn ambiguous but intense.
| Way!! Way!! Two chapters in a row!! -makes happy dance-
Your muse is on vacation? Naughty girl! It seems mine spotted her sunbathing topless on a Hawaiian beach. You see, mine too is far gone, so we, worthless mortals, have to cope without them for a while.
Anyway, you seem to cope quite well indeed. Loved the chapters. A little introspection on the characters inner motives is always good. I quite appreciate the way you keep Sesshoumaru in character. He's not all mushy aroung Kagome, and they don't fall for each other on first sight. My favorite thing about Sess/Kag fics is the slow appearance of caring, affection, and then love. And I prefer it when it's done realistically. You're doing really fine so far, so keep on the good job!! Dewa mata
| Nah, I couldn't miss it!! He was wonderful in that film ^_^
Very good chapter, by the way. Youkai barbeque. Yummmy XD. Dewa mata
(Chapter 7) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
| I hate you and I love you xD
This story is just so awesome! But gosh! Did you really have to leave the hanger??!?!??!?!?!?! More please :3
Musouka (Chapter 7) - Fri 11 Jul 2008
| The Battle Scene Was Excellent! I Haven't Read One Like It! I Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter ... Where Are The Girls?
catrice (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jul 2008
| I think this story is great! I was a little confused in the beginning when she was having flashbacks, but I'm good now... Please update soon.
Musouka (Chapter 6) - Mon 07 Jul 2008
| I Smell A Fight Coming! Woot Woot!
Update Soon I Wanna Read MOre!
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