Nice start! I got a little confused, then got right back on track! Good work, and keep it up!
I...like this, actually. It's amusing, in a "what the heck is he thinking" kind of way, but declaring war on someone for spilling milk on his Persian rug is so "Sesshomaru" that I can't help but giggle at it. You kept him in character, which is more than some people cam say that they've gone.
Oh and for not having written in a while, you're still pretty good at pulling a body in lol.
Awesome job, and I'll be looking out for the next chapter!
~Aubrey
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