you should definitely update the sequel! it's only on ff.net, right? this is such a great and original story!!!

I really like this one shot :) its pretty cool as a one shot but I'd love to see what you could do if you made it into a chapter story too ^-^

Haha, I still can't be bothered to sign in to review stories, but... :S

I loved your story!! :D

I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru...

I really like that more cold and uncaring side of him as shown in the original work... rather than that overly sweet and caring guy that you see in some fanfics... o.o

:)

Update as soon as you can~

You seem to stumble over a few parts and some parts are repeated too much but overall it´s good. I like the idea and hope to read about what happened to Sesshoumaru after he found his dead mate.

I loved it. It is so sweet. So sad. The pain of losing someone is very big... and you captured it perfectly. Great Work. Please Continue the story ! ;D

Oh  please write more I would love to see where this story goes!!!!