I'm incredibly intrigued! I like the atmosphere & suspense you built. I wasn't sure if the village headman was going to hand Kagome over to a savior or a villian. I'm looking forward to finding out why the village would trust a demon when (from the prologue, if I read it correctly) demons seem to have been all but wiped out or are in hiding. 
I can't wait to see what happens next :) 
  
  
      
I like your story, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please! 
      
Addy (Chapter 3) -  Thu 07 Apr 2011 
Shippou~! <3 
      
Beautifully written! I love your style~ Hopefully Kagome's head will feel better soon...a rock to the skull sure does make things harder to think about... 
      
I like this story so far. :) It sounds very interesting. Please update soon.  
      
So far I'm interested please continue 
      
Oh my goodness. This feels like a good one! I can already sense the impending terror ._. Please keep up the good work! :) If you need help with anything, I'm an English Education major~   
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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