So I am still procrastinating on your other halloween story And read this one instead. Though I am pretty sure I read this one once, probably another site. It was cute so I decided to leave a review here. Nothing particularly creepy err unless you count Jaken LOL...or maybe Inuyasha at a Hello Kitty convention.
I think my favorite part was with him in his true form. Sometimes his true form gets pretty neglected. Maybe some people are just in denial that the man is a dog lol...ok, that was a strange statement. And somewhat ironic considering I think he acts more like a cat most of the time. Standoffish and moody and mostly unimpressed with everyone and everything.
Thanks for another cute story! I am sad that I am running out.
marisel (Chapter 2) - Thu 14 Mar 2019
Nice really nice
! This is a lovely story.
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Fri 27 Feb 2015
The Characters don't seem OOC. That was a Wonderful Love Story and i Enjoyed it very much!!
REDWOLF (Chapter 2) - Tue 24 Jun 2014
GREAT story! Never read one like it and that gives it more colorful meaning! Glad the half brothers were nice to each other.
I really enjoyed your story. It was romantic and sweet. I liked the halloween setting.
TKE (Chapter 2) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Very sweet, I enjoyed it!!
Maya Angelou passed away, this story was nice and I enjoyed it!
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
This story sounds interesting, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
Nicole (Chapter 2) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
I enjoyed that a lot!
It was sweet and awesome plot.
But, I got a bit confused when the year past by so quickly. I'd love more details on their courtship and info on how Shippo reacted to Kagome's presence as well. But the story was awesome
amy (Chapter 1) - Sun 06 Mar 2011
GORGEOUS
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Mar 2011
I really enjoyed it! Can't wait to see future work!
Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Sat 05 Mar 2011
I liked that a lot. It was very well written ^_^
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