Reviews for Lord Charming by forthright

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JeniNeji (Chapter 161) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

:gasp!: Pervert!!! >_<


Emily (Chapter 161) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

Ah, everytime I see your upates in my inbox I get a little squee of happiness! Honestly you are the best Inuyasha fanfiction writer I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You brighten up my whole day. :D Especially when you write ones like this ;3


Loveyaa (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Its kinda sad (and yet funny) that this is probably as much action as Sesshoumaru has gotten. Kissing a girl in his trysting cave and sharing a bed with her. As if their relationship could get any weirder. I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Fallen0x (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

either i'm just really tired or dumb, but what was he trying to say by pointing up? on the roof? O.o;; obviously it's not a good thing lol I'm just lost haha XD either way i love the story! :)


TrianaStyx (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Is somebody going to wake up wrapped around another somebody after posturing a dislike of sharing a bed with said someone??? I certainly hope so!!!! :D 


DeviousDemon (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Hahaha!!! The ending line in this chapter is probably my favorite line in this whole story. I just wanted to congratulate you on your very entertaining imaginative skills!


Enchanting_Breeze (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

:) Cute


Allyonora (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

hahahaha! Someone is pouting big time!


KEdakumi (Chapter 160) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

This is another excellent story.  The sexual tension is rising, I love it.  And  “Chivalry’s dead, and Sesshoumaru-sama killed it.” is the best. line. ever. :)


TrianaStyx (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

I was really hoping that the kisses would Lead to excitement or realization! : sigh : But! :D I do believe they will see their perfectness together eventually! :D :D :D Love this story & how often you update! Amazing! 


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Wow, that was unexpected...but overly humourous none the less. Poor Kagome, no better use then some type kissing test dummy, poor chicka, maybe it'll get better with time. Until the next updates!!!


Fallen0x (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

awwww poor Sesshoumaru! I guess he can't be good at everything lol XD


Kimberley (Chapter 158) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

I'm half expecting Kagome to get fed up and take matters into her own hands. She's got enough spunk to produce a good kiss, she can show Sesshoumaru a thing or two, I think (:
This awkwardness is awful, but I love it! Hilarious :D 


Kimberley (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Phahah! 
"You lie," *pout* "There was no excitement."
This is so incredibly awkward, but so hilarious that I can't look away. Sesshoumaru is managing to make Kagome super uncomfortable, no? :D 


Loveyaa (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

Oh hahaha...of course Sesshoumaru would continue towards greatness. Poor Kagome. she did play along though, that is loyalty at it finest. Her closing line/reasoning was priceless though. i wonder if Sesshoumaru will even get to use his new founds skills or if he will want to continue practicing. I can't wait to see what happens next...I have a feeling that its gonna be good :)


sesskag<3 (Chapter 159) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

lol! you're almost evil.

But i love it. there's no passion between them yet, so I wasn't expecting much. UPDATE MORE SOON


drowningsparrow (Chapter 159) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I wasn't sure if I should read this story but I'm glad I did, it's remarkably beautiful. I love their relationship and how it's progressing. If the kiss is not going to be the start of their feelings for one another then maybe the "magic" will come later if it hasn't already. 

I'm glad I gave this a chance. Though, your stories are suppose to be told in short, it felt right and you were able to convey it well. Loving it so far. Thanks for sharing this wonderful work; another story I'm hooked on. Can't wait for your next one!


Jennifer (Chapter 159) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

“I have not yet achieved greatness.” lol i can't stop giggling just picturing his expression, he's far too serious sometimes :)


Jennifer (Chapter 159) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I love this story.  I think their relationship and it's progression is very realistic.  It's amusing that Sesshoumaru wants to 'practice' kissing so he won't be a liar, and I'm not surprised that Kagome gave in to him, but I am glad that you didn't make it into a 'magic' kiss.  You know what I mean?  Like, they weren't interested in each other romantically, but then they kiss, and it was so good that they start looking at each other differently?  I think the way you wrote it is better, at least at this point in their realtionship, because there are no feelings other than loyalty involved.  I do kinda feel sorry for Sesshoumaru, though, because he just doesn't seem to get it.  He doesn't understand the significance emotions play in those acts.  He'll learn, I'm sure!

 

Anyway, thank you for the updates, and keep up the good work!  I look forward to the next chapter!


Allyonora (Chapter 159) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

Oh, Sesshoumaru, you can't just kiss the girl, you have to make her like you! And by the way, you're not fooling anyone!

=D

 


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