this story is really great! can't wait to see more!
please, update soon!!!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 9) - Mon 11 Aug 2008
I wonder what kind of power the sword will have... I mean Tesseiga had like 2 or 3 powerful attacks. So I hope Kagome will unlock a few amazing moves of her own. Keep up the good work and update soon.
This was a joy to read. I like how he is slowly getting use to her and that he finds her attractive. Will there be any dreaming, I think it would be cute if they dream about each othey. Also, what happened to Kouga?
very interesting. so, i want to see how sesshomaru is going to handle training a certain loud-mouthed, whiney miko. lol. can't wait to see that!! more please and asap!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 Aug 2008
Aww... I feel so bad that Kagome learned that all she did was a waste of time since it was all undone by the Shikon. I wonder who can actually kill Kagome? I mean she used to love Inuyasha so since he's dead, Kagome can't be killed right?
Diane (Chapter 8) - Sun 03 Aug 2008
I really like this. Just as an FYI weary means tired, wary means cautious, you have Kagome looking tiredly up at her attacker in the Bingo paragraph.
lol. What a bunch of unrully kids they are! I can imagine them arguing while Rin tries to separate them. good chapter hun, I like your writing. ^_^ Dewa mata
lol. cute.
That was funny! Sesshoumaru was flirting! hehe I'm sure he'd deny it. By the way, Wouldn't Tetsuaiga be back in the tomb now that Inuyasha didn't go and get it... and if not, where is it? and the robe of the fire rat also, I suppose they must be enshrined at his grave site or something. Kinda odd if you think about it, the sword must be back in the tomb, but Sesshoumaru's arm seems to still be missing. Maybe since the arm was left in the in between world, the jewel couldn't work to undo the actions of the Inuyasha it destroyed to fulfill the wish.
lol! update soon, this story's great
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 7) - Thu 31 Jul 2008
That was kinda funny at the end... So, when are we going to see her new sword in action? I'm very curious about the sword's potential and its real name. Look forward to future updates, and keep up the good work :P
you've done a good job so far. you've got a couple of holes that certain reviewers below were kind enough to point out and i wanted to let you know something as well. if what you're going by is good at face-value then kikyou and inuyasha shouldn't have met. inuyasha only went to the village after the jewel and only (originally) went after kikyou for it. yes, they eventually fell in love, but only after they were brought together by the jewel. good story tho. :D and i see how sesshomaru wasn't really affected by the wish: he never really desired the jewel, never went after it like inu did. he went after naraku because naraku went after rin and sought to absorb him for a power boost.
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Terri (Chapter 6) - Wed 23 Jul 2008
question, if everyone was to live their life as they never might Kagome, then how did Rin and Sesshomaru get together, because it was due to Inuyasha hurting Sesshomaru while he was with Kagome that lead to Sesshomaru and Rin meeting. Sesshomaru would never had met Rin and therefore would not have been there to save her. Another thing is why does Sesshomaru remember Kagome being with Inuyasha if the past was rewritten by her wish anf that never happen? Can you address this issue.
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 6) - Wed 23 Jul 2008
I'm interested to know how Sesshoumaru can still remember the original past... I mean Inuyasha died 30 yrs ago, so how come Sess doesn't acknowledge that fact? Also, will Kagome run into miroku, sango or shippou later on?
Very interesting, but you raise some questions. Why does Sesshomaru remember her? What's the connection? Please update soon:)
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 4) - Thu 17 Jul 2008
I really like how this story as prgressed so far... And now I sort of understand why no one remembers her. If things are meant to be as they were before Naraku existed then that means that Kagome would never have met them in the first place... Keep up the good work :P
tina (Chapter 2) - Tue 17 Jun 2008
wait why wouldnt he remember her?
Keep going. Its written well so far and I enjoy your Sessy. Good job and update soon.
He remembers her! And so does Rin....
tifany (Chapter 2) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
niceeeee very niceee... plsss update again soon will be waiting hehehehehe
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