Aww that was adorable! You should post that one too!!!!!

Very beautifully written. I love the fact that you gave Kagome a chance to see herself through someone else eyes.. and what she saw was something truly amazing. You've showed a side of Sesshomaru doing this that few often touch upon. :) Great job hun.

Excellent. I love how you depicted Kagome with the common attitude that most modern girls have about their appearance. A lot of people don't do that. I think it made Kagome more modern.