You did a great job and yes, yes I want more chapters with them slowly getting to know each other and eventually falling in love.  You have the makings of a really good story here. 
      
amy (Chapter 1) -  Fri 07 Jan 2011 
FABULOUS! IT WOULDN'T BOTHER  ME IF YOU MADE IT INTO A FULL LENGTH STORY! 
      
bug (Chapter 1) -  Thu 06 Jan 2011 
I sure she was the only human stupid enough... or brave enough to chastise Sesshoumaru.  I enjoyed it! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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