Your story is really well done, I don't mean to be rude or anything but the title surprise in chapter 4 just says surprise and nothing else, was that supposed to be some kind of a joke?
sandy (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Oct 2008
| OMG! YOU SOO HYAVE TO KEEP ON WRITING THIS FANFIC, I COULDN'T STOP READING IT WHEN I STARTED.....I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Anggie (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Sep 2008
| I love it! Its different and new, I can't wait for new chapters. Keep up the good work.
Nobody (Chapter 3) - Tue 09 Sep 2008
| its very interesting Kagome is a little ooc. The interaction between kagome and lily is confusing at times. But not bad.
Musouka (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Jun 2008
| Lovely Story You Got Going! I Love Kagomes Bad Ass Attitude! Yay! No More Sweet And Innocent! Can't Wait To Read Chapter 3 Update Soon!
| I like the plot and some of storyline, but I can understand why Kagome's well Kagome in this plot, but why does talk like that to her child? I don't get why her own mother called her a bitch??!! What type relationship is that? No mother says that to her child unless they hate each other. And my mother is single parent too, and no matter how frustrated she gets with me or my sister, she never called us out of our name or anything of the sort. It just really bothers me that Kagome, of all people, would say that about her oh so adored child. Other than that it's not so bad.
Jill Dozer (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jun 2008
| It's a great first chapter so far,keep up the good work.
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