I like your story.   I look forward to seeing how it developes.
where is this going & is this a bizarre story ??? does the dream mean something & is it really her dreaming about her....is it future ,past? 
      
flitterbugz (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010 
awwww!!!!!!!!! update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
      
KACE22 (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010 
I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE KEEP IT COMING  I REALLY HOPE U DO NOT SUFFER FROM WRITER'S BLOCK. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK 
      
mizdsigner (Chapter 2) - Tue 09 Nov 2010 
its gud...please make it longer 
      
Tsuki (Chapter 1) -  Mon 08 Nov 2010 
:] I like it so far, I think you are off to a great start!!! But you should make the chapters longer because I wanna read more, I think you have something really great here, so keep up the good work!! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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