MORE UPDATES!

ok for starters:THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS MAC AND CHESE IN THIS ERA WOMEN!

BUT OTHER THEN THAT IT WAS GOOD

You should put there more descriptions and stuff..you´re running too fast in the storyline..but keep working, it will be better:)

Oh yeah... and not so much "sugar", please...I can hardly imagine Kagome saying "You’re really sweet Sesshomaru!" and things like that...and what about behavior of Sesshoumaru?  ...I hope this can help you:)

good luck:)

WHO EVERY MADE THIS STORY NEEDS TO MAKE MORE CHATERS LIKE SERIOUSLY I WANT MORE

this is great Kagome-chan, keep up the good work

update soon