This was so touching and I loved how you explored the depressing facets of immortality and conveyed them so convincingly via Kagome's psyche. And your writing is excellent and heartfelt. Don't stop writing. Well done.
What a tragic way to fall in love again, but I guess all's well that ends well. It was quite a touching story and quite meaningful.
OMG!
You are good!
Kudos to you and your band of beta's.
Keep writing!
that was so ridiculously sad and also so wonderful
This was awesome, great job!
This was lovely, yet somber. awesome
Sena (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Apr 2010
Interesting story, I like how it covers much of thier lives in a fairly short story. Interesting look on Kagome becomming immortal. Thanks for sharing!
I've actually sat here and cried while reading this. This is so beautiful and wonderfully written. Thankyou very much for writing this one shot.
| You captured so much emotion in such a short piece. I really felt Kagome's resigned despair and then the realisation of hope. Thank-you for writing!
| I think, life in general, is a gift. You have to take what you get, and live it up to its fullest. You just can't waste on precious moment.
I like how your one-shot encompassed that thought. You did a very good job! I can't wait to read more of your work!
wawa (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jan 2009
| That was a fantastic read! I like how it took them many years to get together and not just throwing them together after the first meeting.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jan 2009
Ok i know i reviewed this one. I love this story. SO much, it is by far one of my favorites for so many reasons. Its so interesting, a read that i can reread and feel completely satisfied. you touch on such and interesting subject. Its wonderful.
| This ficlet made me cry! Darn it! Anyway, another lovely story, but I happen to like this ending better than in "And So She Pretends". Fantastic job!
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