original, i like it and i can not wait for more of the story and see what you can do. up date soon well plot out.
I like it. It's new, different, original, I hope you continue it.
Nice storyline. There were a few spelling errors that threw me off for a sec but other than that I liked the premise of the story. I would have liked to known if they talked or anything afterwards or what happened after the concert or when she went back to the feudal era. Please don't get me wrong, I enjoyed it, just would liked more of it I guess. :) So that can't be a bad thing! (LOL) Just be sure to double check for spelling errors...they can be so frustrating I know. Good job though! I would love a sequel or something to this, I think it has the basis for a really good story.
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