Yay! Thanks for the update! I can't wait to see what happens next. Glad everyone is one big pack again. :)
I am both ecstatic and grateful that you have become active again with this story. Although far too shy to attempt writing a fan fic, I love reading them, and have you on my favorite authors list. As with all your stories, this is well told, and rich with imagery. You have brought me to tears more than once, and have made me spit my soda on an occassion. (I've learned to stop reading while drinking). Your masterful weaving of the tale itself, and the inter-relations of all the characters is wonderful to see. You make me live the story while you write it, and I have reread this story many times in the hopes you would return and finish it! I'm not too sure how *reviewish* this has been, but I wanted you to know I love both the story and your style. AND love thatInuyasha is not some deliberately mean, cruel or twisted psyche, merely a rough lovable idiot. Intelligent yes, but still an idiot. Thank you!
Natalia (Chapter 99) - Fri 30 Mar 2018
Hey thx for the shout-out!
I am glad to help!
It is an amazing chapter! So touching and deep! We can see the affection and closeness between them. And inuyasha is so mature!
Thx for updating. Gidf luck with everything your job included.
Cheers!
Lauren (Chapter 45) - Fri 02 Mar 2018
I'm really confused. These chapters don't seem to connect to each other at all, the scenes are disjointed, and you're hinting to a multitude of issues, but you've yet to have the characters have a real conversation. Kagome is afraid, but you didn't make clear of what she's fearful of. Sesshomaru is kind of mysterious, but just comes off as tired. And Inuyasha is alive somehow, but six chapters ago you said he was dead - in both actions, and in your author's note...
That was a wonderful update. This story is very intricate and I like the way you have written your characters. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks so much.
Natalia (Chapter 98) - Mon 12 Feb 2018
yes yes yes! another beautiful amazing chapter!
thank you a thousand times!
i am glad shippo wants to help
you described kagome perfectly and the moment when sesshoumaru was watching her admiring her and bonding with the pups... adorable...
and inuasha realized they are mated! i bet its a blow to his pride either way and unexpected!
thx a lot for updating.
i would propose to beta but English isn't my mother language, apologies, but i can help with brainstorming maybe? cause seriously i love your work!
take care!
YAH! Finally! That was good All the way around. They are all happy and dealing with their new lives. Now...the dragons are coming. Looking forward to more!
It’s all coming together. I love Kogane and Kouken, they are sweet together.
Wahoo! Finally! Lovely chapter and sweetly told. Also, some sense from Inuyasha! Finally, he stopped to think. Thanks!
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