thatwas good in my opinuon so keep it up i look ford to the next chapter (:
wawa (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Jun 2008
| Nice start!! I look forward for the next chapter. I really don't like Kagome's dad right now.
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
| Minus a few spelling errors, you got something different going. Nice opening...short but nice...I'll be watching this one...
Jessica (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
| From the summary I gathered that the story would be about the inuyoukai that was outcasted and I thought that would be Kagome...so needless to say I'm a little confused. Other than that the story has a good start.
| I too thought that the Inu Youkai would be Kagome as well, but over all it was an interesting read.
good luck
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