Reviews for Command Me by Syndril

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Dreamerzlove (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Sep 2010
:O im in love ^.^ the unpure thoughts that Yasha seems to be having reminds me of most guys i know xD i can just picture all the things doggy Sessh is gonna do when he starts to try to make these thoughts a reality :D LOTS OF LOVE! ~Dreamerz~

KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

Ooooo... Good story!  Can't wait to see if Sess rips the seat outta Yasha's pants...I mean plans...  :)  That would be great! 


CookieAsylum (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

I'm really liking this story. <3

Though, if I may offer one critique, is that you should separate the dialogue into separate paragraphs. That way, it indicates who is speaking, and so you don't have just huge blocks of text. As it is right now, it is difficult to read.

Other than that, keep up the beautiful work.

- CA


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

i think i'm in love with this fic! :3


Tsuki (Chapter 2) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

Yay!! *does victory dance* You updated again :D

I am really getting into this story! Keep up the awesome work!


Silverwing (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

This is fun. I like that Kagome and Sango have their own buisness, nice concept. Hope you update soon and I'm glad your confidence in your stories is growing!


Manatee (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010

Woot!  I really liked this opening chapter for your story.  I'm very excited to see where you go with it!


Dreamerzlove (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
oooooh :D another story! yay! i like the concept of it ^.^ and now you have me wondering whats going to happen (as all the great stories do). you got me hooked with your fairy story and i have to say you have talent ^.~ LOTS OF LOVE! ~Dreamerz~

monk-miko (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010

Another story already!!!!  This turned out just as interesting as the last one.  I really want to know how Sesshomaru and Kagome are going to get along now that he is living with her.  I wonder if it was Inuyasha that left him there at the shop.  Hope to see another chapter very soon.  Keep up the great work.


Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010

Wow this is really good so far! :D

Great start so far!


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