Loving the story
Hojo should have died. Keep up the good work.
The mystery guests might be bad news for Kagome! Hojo is sooooo dead in my book! Please update soon!
I have eoyed this story so much! Please update as soon as possible!
Oh my gosh! You got to update! lol
Hihi I really am enjoying this fic and csnt wait for more chapters!!! PLease hurry back to ths fic!!!!
I'm curious to see what you come up with for Kagome to quiet Hojo.
Wahhhhh!!!! *Loves* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update this story! Please please PLEASE! I absolutely adore it!
so far i love it plz update soon i really wont to no wat happens next
So far I love love love this story! Chapter 8 hasn't come very soon though *pouts*
I really liked this chapter. The suspense is killing me!!! I can't wait to find out when everyone else knows about Kagome and Sesshomaru. And I wonder who the "guests" are going to be? Please update soon!
keep writing it is soooo good
Poor Kags... I hope Sesshy is all healed, cause it looks like they might have to make a speedy get-away.
Thanks for the updates!! Please keep them coming!
Such a sweet sweet story so far :) I can't wait to see who these guests are and if Hojo will get to tell anyone :/
Oooo... I can't believe she's going back like nothing happened. So oblivious. You know Hojo's gonna talk like she is possessed or something. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Yay :) You updated!!!! :D
I am so happy Sesshy asked Kagome to be his mate!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Great update! :D It is really interesting that added Inuyasha!
I loveee this story, keep up the good work!
A couple of missing commas and a spelling error or two, but no glaring errors. Everything is progressing nicely. Good job.
The only thing that threw me off a little was when she's heading back to the village to gather supplies, and you wrote 'Kagome skipped along the path back to the village with vigor, in such a trance she’d been in, she hadn’t realized she’d traveled so far from the village.' The part that reads 'in such a trance she'd been in,' is a little off, in my opinion. I understand what you're trying to say, but the way it's worded doesn't make sense. Not saying you've gotta change anything, but it interrupts the flow a bit. Even putting 'having been in such a trance' instead (or something of that nature) would make it a lot smoother.
Don't take that the wrong way. It's constructive criticism, I'm not bashing the quality of your work or anything. It's a good read.
So far it looks great! Interesting premise, and good flow. Very valid points made here; the whole human/demon rivalry is just a bunch of contradictory BS.
Props, hon!
I like it, please update soon
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