OMG! I just happened across this one-shot, and was floored by it! This is pure poetry! With so few words, it said so much. It touched the deepest part of my heart and soul. Thank you! You are an awesome author. :D
swift death (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
wow, he sure waited and in the end the wait was sssoooo well worth it. great story by the way :)
How could I have missed this? This is a simple yet beautiful piece, and I definitely enjoyed your writing style in this one! Great job, Saffie! I haven't found something written by you which I do not like.
awww Saffie that was sooo sweet!!! Mesa lubbed it bunches!
| awwwww....you gonna continue it somehow? like him having to wait again but this time for his heir to be born....or something like that.....
really sweet...I love this oneshot!
| Wow! This was very good and very powerful! I loved the feeling of determination he had in this story. And the ending line was the best! Great job!!!
| | | | | | 