I so thought she was talking to InuYasha about Sesshomaru and Rin in the beginning! You had me totally fooled. But I must admit, I'm still confused. Is Rin with InuYasha (which is what I took from it) or is something else going on that I missed. I don't want to sound stupid but I'm afraid I might have missed what you were trying to say. That would be my only complaint...it just left me confused. I love the ending line and maybe that is where I'm getting lost at, even though that is what brought it all together. I hope I'm not confusing you too...sorry if I am. Other than that I think you did a good job on this story and I like where (I think?) you were headed and I loved the fact that you confused the hell out of me!! :)
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