I'm torn between wanting to hug you and throttle you. Heh. I want to hug you for this delectable serving of words artfully strung together, and throttle you for not bringing it on sooner; it's hard enough to find gems to read these latter days.
Nice tempo, unrushed and completely gratifying.
Don't stay away for too long.
Akay (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Aug 2010
I really liked this, it was sweet. Sesshoumaru is the bestest bartender ever. And Miroku... ah Miroku, you can't help but to love him. He's so subtle isn't he. LOL. Good job Hasu, thanks for participating.
kuro (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Aug 2010
Very nice, I liked it.
Awww this was absolutely enjoyable! What a little delight...it was everything a oneshot should be with a good, strong setting, characterizations and content. I enjoyed how you brought us into the story with smooth, flowing conversations without rigid descriptions like 'This is _____, this is _____'. It made the read very enjoyable, and Sesshoumaru as a bartender was absolutely divine. Miroku's helpfulness was also much appreciated :D It was very nice to see Kagome mature and sexy in her own girlish way, as in not sex-crazed slut or whiny, rambling girl.
Great job done; I enjoyed reading this. :)
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