oooh great ending. I hope you'll think about expanding this! I thought it was amazing. Its not often that a S/K is told through the perspective of Inuyasha, so this was an interesting insight!

Inuyasha is definitely green with envy, a very appropriate story for the prompt. However, I think this story would benefit from a quick editing session, as there were a few small errors in spelling/grammar here and there, but other than that this was very well done Dragoness!

This was extremely well written for the prompt of Envy -huggles-.
I am glad that Inuyasha sees what he is missing out with Kagome, and I am glad that Sesshoumaru got the girl! Keep up the good work!

Very interesting piece, though it could use a good edit.  At the beginning you start with first person and switch to third mid paragraph.  I would reccomend just keeping to third, as it tends to be easier to write.  And I did notice a few mistakes, such as bowls instead of bows, but they would be easy to catch with a quick reread. 

That was good, very nicely written :D