I like this a lot so far, you write well and you are great at bringing out emotions! :D Keep up the good work!!

Wow, I can't believe I didn't read this sooner. The story's off to a great start and I like the way you portrayed powerful emotions with simple words. Chapter three definitely caught my attention. Kagome killed Inuyasha...? Wow. I am definitely looking forward to more.

this is a great beginning cant wait to read the next, lovin it!!