The last chapter is dark and bloody, something that ,I believe , nobody could see coming.  And I can say that it surprised me very much. I like your story a lot, and will be waiting what else you have stored for all of the characters in the story.  I wonder how Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru characters will end up portrayed, since they have such a dark aura to them. 

its great!! please continue!!

Ut oh, where did they do? ;) Interesting so far!

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story so far! :) Your use of imagery is really great! I can just picture Kagome's transformation pretty well! :) I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Keep up the great work! :D