this is a super great story i really REALLY  loved it keep up the great work i hope to read more from you soon ^_^

If you have time please please update!!! I cannot wait to read the next chapter! =)

Interesting, please update soon.

Cool, what happens next? Hope you post the next chapter soon. Sounds like a good one.

Interesting premise - I'll be waiting to see more...

Amber

omgosh! I love the sound of this story so I'd thought I'd take a look at your other stories under the Spark section....OMG! YOU WROTE "ACROSS TIME"!?!? I have been DYING to see what happens in that story for SEVERAL YEARS!! PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE REPOSTING "ACROSS TIME" AND WILL UPDATE IT!!!! I NEED to see what happens next!!! pwease?

haha lol very intriguing

please update!!

*Squee!*

Awesome awesome awesome awesome!

I can't wait for more. =D You write very well btw. Great job!

Can't wait to see what happens next. >.<~!

Please continue!! I wonder what Sesshomaru would do... XD