update NOW or i will kill youuuuu!!!!!!!!!

please update

Interesting... well since you're wanting help with this I'd like to offer you some advice. :D First off, you spelled Summary wrong. Second off, if you put a space between paragraphs of description and "speech" it would make it look less cluttered. Make sure your punctuation is correct! I noticed in a different story of yours that you sometimes failed to put the quotation marks where they needed to be. Like for example: Kagome talked to Sango", Hi!" notice how the comma comes after the ". that isn't correct. It should be: Kagome talked to Sango, "Hi!" Just remember those little things. Even little problems like that can distract from a story. Feel free to check out my stories on how to make the "speech" and whatnot spaced out. ^_^ I hope I helped.

Also some other misspelled words are "Disappearing" and "Prologue." Another suggestion: Before I put my summaries up, I write them in Microsoft word and spell check them so that way I know they are correct. The same goes for titles of chapters and stories. Microsoft Word is your friend for life; both in and out of fan fictions and real life.

WOW! Update soon! Kagome's a black moon inu? I love your name! JA NE!