Excellent.  You captured the rythem well.  Thank you for sharing it with us.

There is something about this story that has an Egar Alan Poe feel. Great Job.

LMAO!  Not to play a pun on the theme but ... classic!

Amber

Ah~ Awesomeness at its purest state.

All the way to the end, a stubborn smile was on my face.

I'm so favoring this. Loved it.

I like your take on the Raven. :D I was grinning the whole way through!

I couldn't help but smile the whole time reading that :D AHHH!!! It was soooo awesome Great Job!!!! :D :D :D :D