Thank you Rowdys Girl and TruGemini. I am usually right on target when it comes to catching gramatical mistakes or spelling mistakes. I really felt like The Bard that day and hopefully I will feel like him again when it is time for me to write the next sonnet.

Love it. You must be channeling the Bard. There was one little thing that threw it off a bit:  Death will not know your name, because it is [mines] mine to utter;

Another beautiful one, and, you managed to capture his character quite well in that one. His arrogance definitely shines through a little at the end. great work!

Look forward to the second chapter, a remake on sonnet 18.

Thank you all very much. I am so in love with Shakespeare and I felt that one way to incorporate Shakespeare into something that is Sesshomaru and Kagome was to write poems from him to her.

This poem is good. I like how the whole sonnet was turned around.

I love Shakespeare sonnets! That was beautiful!

First of all, I love Shakespeares' writing. Second of all, you did a superb job of this. Excellent, excellent work!