So I have a question... isn't faded glory and jordache both brands that are sold at Walmart? (No offense, hell I shop there too)" but if she's rich, I don't that any of them would be wearing these brands. Interesting idea though.
Karli (Chapter 13) - Tue 24 Jan 2012
it says that this story is finished so when and where is the new chapter gonna be
Eklipse (Chapter 13) - Fri 08 Jul 2011
AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! I LOVE the story! but I am so sad that you left us hanging in the end. What are in the boxes!!!??
12 and 13?? O_O
They seem older xD
Especially w/ ch 4 ._.
Great story though!
Amy (Chapter 13) - Wed 23 Jun 2010
SWEET ,ROMANTIC,ADVENTUROUS,THANK YOU FOR A WONDEROUS ROMP!
honestly this story should be deleted and completey redone
this story needs a lot of work. nothing about it is very good. the idea is decent. unoriginal but good still. there is alot of work to be done here. i would say get a very good beta or a co writer.
nerine (Chapter 13) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| Great story ive read this one a few times. i first read it in 2007. so since it two years later and i still read it that should tell u i really like the story. I love the way u make Kagome look in the story she is so pretty!!
The Critic (Chapter 7) - Sat 28 Jun 2008
| You have a lot of potential, so next time use an outline to help develope a plot and organize it. Also, You don't need a fashion description every time they change clothes. If you want to be a better writer read as many stories as you can and notice how the better writerd put in their descriptions not for the entertainment value but to learn how to doo it.
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