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I had to read your notes haha
It was extremely clever though! Too clever for my poor brain haha. Great job!
I'm certainly not a fan of this type of story, HOWEVER I must say that this was exquisitely written. Your elloquence with the written word, is a rare gem, indeed. I'd love to see what you could do with a less dark piece. Those are what I tend to gravitate to, as dark fics such as this leave me all twisted inside (which I get is the point, but I still dont like feeling that way!) I'm faving you as an author. I hope you'll consider writing somethig more "fluffy" - although angst is ALWAYS welcome in the fluff! :) Please keep writing, be it dark fic or fluffy goodness! Tallent such as yours should not be left idle. <3
