Wow. Well depicted. It has a Phantom of the Opera feel to is, but is decadent as well. Nicely written. Somehow it feels open ended, like it could be continued.

Wow, nice writing!  I'm glad Sango warned Kagome about Sesshomaru's habits...  Kind of reminds me of a couple of a Pat Benetar song.  "Hit Me With Your Best Shot".  "You're a real tough cookie with a long history; Of breakin' little hearts like the one in me."  Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter! 

Oh please do a second part! This was so good it needs...no, screams for a second part at least.