I really, really liked this story. Kagome is adorable and so cute. And her and Sesshomaru's meet cute is awesome and their subsequent meeting is absolutely perfect. I did notice some glaring and wince-inducing typos, however, such as Renaissance spelled as something else and foul misspelled as "fowl" (which means chicken/duck/goose family, FYI). 
But I was still able to enjoy your story regardless. Anyway, keep on writing and honing your craft. 
      
Awesomeness.  
      
absolutely lovely! I love the way kagome pranked kouga like that and very glad that she managed to get a different and possibly better job, and one that lets her work wtih sango, the distribution of characters was well done and i love the way sesshomaru and kgome kicked off their maybe relationship, you hit just the right note, only potential complaint was that i wish i knew what happened between kouga and ayame 
      
Bailey (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011 
I caught a typo and thought you should know. I do believe that Kagome and Sesshy were walking out into the crisp fall air not the crisp fall hair as they apear to be doing now. Well, I suppose with Yura in the story it may possibly be hair...  
      
flitterbugz (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Jan 2011 
awww! i just adored that! will u make a sequel??? it was perfectly written!! 
      
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY ONLY ONE CHAPTER SOOOOOOOO NOT FAIR I WANT MORE!!!!!!  
Very good one you should be able to tell by that bit of dioloug above 
      
hahahahaha I love it! great work!!! 
      
I can only say that less than ten FanFics have ever made me laugh so much i cried.....Thankyou very much for a much needed laugh......I also read your other fic and it was completely entertaining as well (I hope you update soon with that fic)....But this fic was well written and a perfect form of humor......I smile for you :D 
Darkness :D :D :D :D 
      
Ruriame (Chapter 1) -  Sun 04 Apr 2010 
I really liked that. It was a cute little story. I like how you used minor characters like Yura and Shiori because their roles, although small, added to the feel of the whole thing. And the dialogue was great. I could envision the scene with the words Kagome said particularly. Nice job ^_^ 
      
SEB (Chapter 1) -  Sat 03 Apr 2010 
Thanks for the fun read!  
      
that was cute as hell! 
      
Indie (Chapter 1) -  Sat 03 Apr 2010 
Delightful. It's not the typical office fict, like I have seen so many times. And yay! Kagome has a backbone. Nice job with the dialog flow and chracterizations. I throughly enjoyed reading this. 
      
That was cute! I really enjoyed it. 
      
I loved it! ^-^ I can't wait for more stories from you! 
      
Neva (Chapter 1) -  Sat 03 Apr 2010 
very cute story! characters and plot were nicely developed, not too little or too much. i definitely like the ending. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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