Okay, I reread your story and I take back some of the things I said in my review, I do get what is going on, Kikyo is cheating on her husband with Inuyasha or she's stringing him along something in that manner. Kagome believes her sister to be a saint, a person she hadn't seen in a long time. But does she live in that cave, if she dose, she's close enough to her sister to see her more often even in just passing. There is something there, so there is substance, I do apologise, I should have re-read it after not reading it for so long, but I do check often for updates. Your are very detailed in your descriptions and have lots of emotion there, the way Kagome felt with Inuyasha's lashing and how Narku's voice gave her shivers. I do love your Kagome! Inu isn't going to get away with bashing her. Your recent chapter in which I based my review on mostly is very short. Did you have to rush or something, it seems very lacking compaired to the first two. Again I apologise for my hasty review, I hope you forgive me. The short chapters are a bit irritating, maybe there is a reason for them. Your story has a lot of potential and is very unique I can't wait for your next chapter and again I truly apologise. Write on! Much Love InuAngel

Your story is very interesting, I really like it but the extremely short chapters are irritating, they don't tell you much at all. I'm not trying to shoot you down or flame you, I don't do that to authors they don't desreve it. Anyone who is brave enough to post and put themselves out there for the world to see and review deserve the upmost respect. Your story will hold a lot of interest and get many more reviews if your chapters were longer and had more information in them. It's three chapters I have not a clue really as what is happening, why and what is actually going on. There is no substance. Try to make them longer, if you can't try to pack a lot more in. Be looking forward to more, update soon! Write on! Again by no means am I putting you down or flaming you I really want to see where this story is heading and what it is truly about! It pretty unique which is what I look for. Kikyo married to Narku, I don't think I've read him in that role before. He is still in character (sadistic) "KUDOS" for that!! Much Love InuAngel

Well, I like the story so far. But are the chapters so short because they're challenges? Just wondering...:)

wow, great start! Can't wait to read the next chapter! I like how detailed you are, that's very important. Great writting skills!

LUV THE WAY KAGOME'S PERSONALITY IS. KEEP IT UP YOUR DOING A GOOD JOB.

this story has great potential when will you be updateing it?