Shoot the head! Cried Meta desperately, You must hit the head hurry!
Kagome quickly took her arrow and started to infuse her power into it, “But Meta, you could be hurt!”
Really, Kagome? Really? Right in the middle of a battle where not acting fast might kill your mate, his mother AND his uncle - and you're worried about hurting a millenia-old beast who will recover even if she gets hit? And you didn't consider that she KNEW she would get hit (how could she not know, being the battle veteran she is, plus being right in the line of fire?), and she probably didn't care about getting hurt. She just just wanted to take the ONE chance you all had in several years to destroy Naraku, because if you didn't take that chance, who knows when you would get another?
All that and she still hesitated to act like a naive teenager? ::sighs:: I don't know if this is just typical of Kagome or what, but she's lucky that her hesitation didn't get them all killed.
Good job on the tension and tautness in this chappie, though - I was on the edge of my seat the whole time - except when Kgaome acted like a fool. That just made me go "Okay, now they're dead. Unless Meta manages a miracle."
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What?
*twitches* FIXIT! MORE! *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you!
lol....love the last sentence and your fic starting from chapter 1. I'll be reviewing your fic.
--Lady Nefertiti.
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So much time and you give us a cliffie? ::sobs::
REDWOLF (Chapter 37) - Wed 22 Feb 2012
Woe!!! This was so good :)
Loveee! As always! ahhhhh, go Meta! I can't wait to see what happens!
-MissK
a twitchy r0o (Chapter 37) - Tue 21 Feb 2012
see makes me crazy in a good way! more pelase!
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