This is 50/50 for me. It's good, it's not good. Needs a grammar check. Good set up, didn't really flow that well though. With every good comment comes another that isn't as good. But still, it's not bad.
i enjoyed your story! thanks for writing! :)
Aw! The ending was sweet. :D
Lexie (Chapter 4) - Fri 26 Mar 2010
nnnaaawwwww ^.^ so cute
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.......
me LIKE!!!
Update soon!!! ^^ now THIS is something... Grrr I wanna eat that Sesshoumaru :P lol
AWWW! That was really sweet!
BTW I know I may sound childish but the only thing I could keep thinking in chap 3, when Sessh healed Kagome's lips, was; INDIRECT KISS! INDIRECT KISS! RED ALARM!
HAHA!
This was a great chapter...Sess always knows when to put his foot down...why can't he tell her why he wants her to stay??
xokaggyfanox (Chapter 3) - Mon 18 Jan 2010
really gud beautiful i love it. rin a miko new twist but it definatly fits her she is so innocent nd pure. i wonder what else you have instored for this story. kagome's powers, the jewel, the wish. one more thing from the chapter sesshoumaru said kagome refused him to revive him...why? kagome had her chance to get inuyasha back why not. was it bc of kikyou wanting him in hell. i'm just confused on that part other than that this is a pretty gud story.
Rin a miko too?? So Sess was leading her to the castle all along?? Sneaky dog
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