oh my frikkin God! your story is so completely amazing...i love it. make sure you update as soon as possible!(:
Wow! Did NOT see that coming! I'm sure she'll get quite the shock when she realizes that her dead uncle is, well...not so dead. I am loving all the intrigue of this story, and you're telling it so well!
I still can't help but feel sorry that Sesshoumaru and Kagome will have to be separated, but hopefully they'll get their 24 hours before any of that comes to fruition. InuYasha is a patient half-demon for putting up with them XD
Great job on another fabulous chapter!
Damn...Kagome's dead uncle!? Who would have guessed? Excellent Chapter!!!! Can't wait for the next!
Thank you for the explanation. I understand better now. I have 3 suggestions for the name for the movement. WAO stands for We Are One; FFO stands for Freedom From Oppression; and WASU stands for We All Stand United. 'Wasu' could also be used as a slang word to identify oneself. Since I don't know the language, I hope it's not a Japanese word that stands for something bad or silly. Or they could call themselves a 'Wao' and an outsider could think their saying the word 'wow'. If nothing else, you might be able to use some of these words and form your own title/slogan.
Yes, I wanted them to be a part of an underground movement, but it looks like they are not going to be given a choice to willingly join. It seems as though they're going to be forced to join which is not right or fair. Even if later they're glad to be a part of the movement, there will always be the stigma in their mind that they were initially forced to join. It will even cause bad feelings by them being separated and kept that way by force. I don't think I like this underground and their tactics. They don't sound much better than the government. You don't receive loyalty through force.
loveyaa (Chapter 32) - Thu 21 Jan 2010
I can't wait to see how everything goes and works out. I guess all good things must come to an end but I loved it while it lasted. I think you did a phenomanal job describing everything and painting a picture of Kagome and Sesshoumaru's time together. Til next time...
Kagome, a Minx half-demon!? LMBO!!!! That was too funny!
ahhh!! GLEEEE!
u gave us two chappies!
awwww, wow, this plot is just getting better and BETTER!!! :D
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 32) - Thu 21 Jan 2010
Phew! They got off by the skin of their teeth, didn't they! Love the teasing Kagome did, Sesshoumaru's got his work cut out for him with her, though I'm sure he doesn't mind one bit ;)
Anothe fabulous chaper! I'm very interested to see what's going to happen when they have to separate Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Great job Miss O!
This is getting so scary. I hate the department and their attitude.
Absolutely one of the best lemons I've seen in a long time. Slow and gentle, yet demanding and true to Sesshomaru's nature.
GREAT JOB.
Damn...is there ever a chapter you write that doesn't involve some serious drama!? Lol. I love this story!!! Update soon!
It figures this would have to happen. I just knew deep down that somehow their coming together would set off bells and whistles that they weren't told about but I think Miroku could have given Sesshoumaru that kind of information seeing as he saw and knew there was some kind of thing going on between them, even if they didn't know. He could have at least put it in a hypothetical(sp?) way so Sessh would know not to let anything intimate happen. JEN
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 31) - Wed 20 Jan 2010
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! What a tense chapter, poor Kagome and Sesshoumaru! Poor Inuyasha! Poor Miroku!!! There in such a bad predicament and I can't wait to see how it pans out. Such a great twist on a Romeo/Juliet story; very lovely!
MoMo (Chapter 31) - Wed 20 Jan 2010
You are awesome please continue.
um....WOW....
That's all.
That was good!!!!! I think I need a smoke. :)
katlady (Chapter 30) - Tue 19 Jan 2010
OH MY.......l0.o SUCH A GOOD UPDATE WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
:sighs: oh so hot too
:tears: so good
I HAVE DIED AND GONE TO HEAVEN!!!!!!!! I came back and died again~!! You have just made my day...no week.. no YEAR!!! You have made my year! Oh my goodness, that was absolutely breathtakingly B-E-A-Utiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You're awesome! Your writing is spectacular!
"I LOVE you!!" ;)
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