I have sooooo many questions ok first kagome felt betrayed by inuyasha which seemed very much justified but Kikyou should be the last person to owe her loyalty with the scheme of this story least of all sesshoumaru well from what I read so far any guilt is mute she's may be in love or deep like of inuyasha but come on like come on ???????? he was a friend at considerable moments a good friend at best and sesshoumaru run that by me again your protection she's lucky to be alive I have a hard time transitioning from Ron mourning to her protection from what exactly and honor and lust have very little to do with the sercum stances when attracted to someone you keep in your company that could lead to love IJS there would be no honor if it was really forced she didn't have doubt or it wasn't a happy ending ???????? over all 

I will said again, the epilogue sucks.  It was just Inu sick mind???  What the hell!!!!!  Love, love the story until the end????. Wow that's an imagination...   But. I will read again later...

Of I know this is already finish bút why can you go back and give Rin an immortal life.  Come on, after dying three times I demand an immortal life with sun.  ????????????

PS.  I love the story read it five times already????????????

AHHHHHHHH I WANNA CRY! I don't remember that ending the first time I read this back then. Dokuga really needs some filter where u can add im a PRIVATE section the stories you've read and sort them into "liked" "I don't read again" lol great story but damn I don't like it all that much. My heart broke like 12 times!  Cot darn it! I would pay for that filter I do not wish to re read this in a few years CRYING????????????????????????????

Ok so full on smut for Rin a twelve year old, but barely nada for the 4 main adults? Lol not weird at all

Okay who am I kidding the story is so well-written I couldn't stay away. Even with the loss of Inuyasha I still want to hear reading. Still a bit depressing

I know I've read this before but I didn't remember a lot of it. I wish this website had a marker that would tell us whether or not we like the story the first time we read it or not so that way we would know not to read it again. The depression I experience reading this was........ well let's just say I hope to not read this ever again too many losses

i cant wait to read more of this

I nearly had a heart attack when you made us think the whole thing was a dream

OH COME ON NOT INU!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

This was well written. Interesting premise. Ok conflict resolution wise. I didn't particularly like the "males must defend mates," aspect but that is just me. As for the character's: loved Abi and Jaken. Everyone else was too ooc to connect to. If this had been an original story with original characters I probably would have enjoyed it more. Overall alright. Left a weird taste in my mouth by the end. 

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I got wigged out by the idea of Inu dreaming up sesskags sex life. That's just wonky, and as for it being his dream, he was not there often enough to make a believeable dream depiction of sesskag's "love life," which I also had an issue wit,h but that is beside the point. I also can't imagine a man who has never had sex dream up the interaction between Rin and Sun, talk about creepy. Other than that I loved the little insights provided about sess's psyche and the tessaiga/ blanket scenario. 

Great story. I was a bit pissed at the ending but then I remember the actual movie "Atonement" and how I was utterly livid I was at that end. But the anger has subsided and I get it now. I spend the whole day reading your story and I laughed and cried and I will never regret reading it.

This was all a dream?! Wow! You really got me, hook, line and sinker, from start to end, and now you dropped the biggest bomb yet! Well played, Miss Kagura! Kudos to your brilliant imagination and writing. The ending was totally Inception quality. ;) I still refuse to believe this was all a dream by Inuyasha. Kinda sad for that poor guy. Nevertheless, I'm glad your epilogue was completely different from others as well as diverged from canon. Ok, enough gushing about your awesomeness. I shall review about the story now. It's a little pitiful that Rin had to die so many times. Can't a poor girl just live once? Haha.. But if it weren't for Inuyasha's careless mistake, Sesshoumaru and Kagome would not have been together. Their love story is just great. I liked the way you portray each of the characters. Sesshoumaru was deadly but with depth to his soul.  Kagome wasn't the normal helpless girl. And Abi is one hell of a cat! Meow! I was so psyched when she finally met Inuyasha. Their chemistry was sparking! Ooh! I love love love the forest top habitat. Great idea really. Where do you get all your inspiration from? Although, Miroku and Sango weren't given much in plot time, I'm happy you introduced Sun! He seems like the perfect match for Rin. It was interesting, the way they met. How Rin fell, jumped and then got picked up by Sun. =) Aww... I just can't stop babbling. I think I should end here, and go into post-awesome-fanfic depression. Thanks for the story!!! ^^

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I have no idea why my previous reviews turned out blank. I don't usually leave reviews, so for me to do it 3 times proves how impressed I was with this story. Hope you'll continue to write fanfics! 

 

I'm sure you get this a lot. I love this story, but can't reallthey and the 'it was all a dream'. In general, it's a clichat that serves little purpose, and in this case I feel like it didn't add anything at all to the story but a depressing spin on an otherwise uplifting ending. I feel like it essentially dim issues everything in the story, and not just the events, but the messages as well. So, while I love your story, I will live with the blissful pretence that those last paragraphe don't exist

Son of a #%*!? No way! That seriously did not just happen?! I never imagined that would happen. Oh gosh, no... This is this tale ends? Cannot write educated sentences. Train of thought derailed.

Seriously one of the funniest chapters I've read.

Perfect!!!