Just read chapter 2 --- LOVED IT. They are meeting in their dreams???? When are they going to find out who they are? Does Sess suspect? hmmmm, can't wait for ch3. Still trying to figure out if there is an alert system with Dokuga, do you know? Are you also on other sites? Well, keep up good work. Rhonda

great chapter. I had been waiting for you to update. You're doing a good job too by keeping Sesshomaru in charecter, making him seem affectionate (in a sesshomaru way)and the fics set in the future....not many people pull that off real well. An overall good job and update soon! Lady Nefertiti.

I enjoyed the story line and your writing is very well done. The only area that could have used a little more depth was maybe background on how Kagome and Naroku met (but that can be done as flashbacks) and more insight into Sesshomaru's thoughts about Kagome and why he and Naroku are enemies. My question would be did Sess know about Kagome even if they hadn't met? Maybe he already had thoughts about her, I mean she is in the room next to his. Just some thoughts, please update soon. I am enjoying your ideas and your story. Rhonda

Omg! I love this story the decriptions are perfect and the speech is so good. It describes the scene without going into unnessary deatales i cannot wait for you to update please update!