NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Did Kagome make it to her own time!?! AHHHHH...you just had to leave his at that MAJOR cliffhanger didn't you? LOL! Well, in this case I really hope she did. I mean after all she's been through she deserves some happiness with her family, her child and most of all herself. I just hope that she doesn't wake up in the feudal era only to realize that the beast is there watching her, condemning her only to punish her in the end. Thank you for this great chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON so we can see what happens in the next chapter. Again thank you and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Samantha (Chapter 22) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
Holy crap!!!!!!!! That was an insane chapter I loved it!! I felt so horrible for Inuyasha though. That last part with him looking at her dieing was just so heartfelt! I felt said that his last moments were moments of emotional pain, but what can one do. Thanks so much for that chapter I am glad that damned braclet it finally gone. I wonder now since he killed the witch if he can have another made. I hope not and that braclet gone seems the start to a healthier more equaled relationship. Thanks again PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON! this is a killer cliffy!
OH MY FRIGGIN GOD! WHA HAPPENED!?!?! OMG OMG OMG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
Oh rotten cliffhanger! So, does she end up going to the future, or is she stuck in the past? Only our great writer knows!
Pleaseohplease update soon :)
the beast is bound to be upset... cant wait for the next chapter... keep up the great work!
Tsuki (Chapter 22) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
Great Chapter :) I'm so glad Kagome might be able to go home.
And Inuyasha caused his death with his stupidity, it made me kinda sad tho :P
Ahh! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D :D :D
REDWOLF (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
I hope something good comes from all her work.....like Sesshoumaru growing a heart. I think I understand where you are going with this, I believe the first of this chapter had many clues written between the lines. However, I could be wrong!
yay! Rin times. :D I nearly laughed at the chocolate moment.
Jekya (Chapter 21) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
| Awesome chap thnx keep up the cgood work I wonder if sesshy might fall for the miko
Tsuki (Chapter 21) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
Good chapter :D
kim` (Chapter 10) - Wed 03 Mar 2010
omg when will sesshy show some care i could glomp him upside the head! ^__^
So wonderful!!! I love reading the chapters. Sorry I haven't been a faithful reviewer. ::much groveling:: I have alot to do, and I'm glad that I got caught up!! This story is going really well. I am glad to see the direction you are taking it. Well I can't wait to see what is going to happen next! Good luck!
This is chapter 20 and Kagome still hates them (Sesh & his beast), cant stand there touch, and she's not really progressing in her feelings. Is there ever going to be something more for the pair because frankly this is getting rather long with nothing happening to soften her attitude towards them.
Yes she's going to pretend to get along but then what? This is not a flame but from a Reader's standpoint as well as an author's it needs to get going, u know lets move on from the nightly rapes, sickness, and 'I hate u so much, dont get near me' chapters. The grammar could use some work as well as Rin's character.
Perhaps u might also want to introduce some other characters, as Sesshy's beast doesnt count! *Just some constructive criticism*
Though, I will be following your fic to see what happens next. It has a good story line and has great potential.
Jekya (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
great chapter
Aki (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
Yes! Yes! Yes!
Get him, Kagome! Make him pay! Make him cry
O_O well it's better than his disappearing altogether. and yay she going to try and fix it...but *_* how? Though I have a idea. Next chapter looks like it'll be interesting. Really liked the rain scene and here memories behind it.
Tsuki (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
Fantastic Chapter :D
mary (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
uh-oh kagome, you have to be extra careful now. don't slip up girl! you have to go home sometime. you just have to! tell madison to let you go. you can do it! i'm rooting for you.
and seshomaru? (the "intelligent" one i mean) why aren't you falling for kagome? she's what you need you fool. you have to see her. not just as a human, but kagome!!!grrr! when will you listen you baka!
and beast, you are such as ass. i hate all the beings with penises in your time(even this time). they're all pricks. they think with their favorite phallus. all idiots the lot.
REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Mon 01 Mar 2010
The gold eye Sesshoumaru is in some deep sh*t now! Kagome is in trouble. Doesn't look like she will love him ever.
kim` (Chapter 3) - Thu 25 Feb 2010
i can't wait till she amkes her escape. the child should come out full demon and surprise everyone. ^___6
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