This flowed very well, her feelings were explicit, and was an excellently written drabble, I'll look foreward to more of your work in the future!

Very nice drabble.  I love your form of writing, it flows almost like poetry.  I really hope to read more of your work in the future.

Cool.  I like the way you express her feelings.  I felt her excitment and the rush myself.  This would be nice to put into a chapter story.  Don't get me wrong it is fine the way it is chapter stories are just my favorite.  But this was so awesome. I loved it.

I wish it were a little longer... Like just why are they out there on that cliff. And what was the catalyst for making her jump into the water? Otherwise I really enjoyed it. I appreciate the insight that Kagome isnt always happy. That in this moment she found happiness, liberty, and peace. Too often Kagome is depicted as insiferably cheery, when the truth is, she must suffer some too. You've elloquated that well here.

I really loved the idea for this fic, and your writing flows really well. I really got the feelings this fic was trying to portray; you conveyed the emotions well!

There were a few mistakes in this fic, but overall, your grammar and spelling were great! One I caught was:

"The pure heady rush is intoxicating, bone-deep—soul deep—elemental in every way that there is no room for thought."

This sentence reads very nicely, but the way it reads is slightly confusing. by re-writing it to say:

"elemental in every way, so that there is no room for thought." it shows that the rush is causing her to have no room for thought.

A very well-written and well thought out piece. Well done!