lol, i like sessy's original line u wrote at the bottom, tho. it might make ur story seem like a conspiracy *^_^*
awww...well, i honestly have to say i was expecting this breakdown for quite some time, and viola! you did a wonderful job of it. i can hardly wait for more.
FL
I love this story so much, you are doing an excellent job with it!! Kagome's break down was excellently excuted! Will Miroku lose his spiritual powers? He'll need them even though he's an excellent fighter. I can't wait to read more update soon, write on! Much Love InuAngel
interesting. man, everyone is having a hard time of it.
Lovely story. Very fun but serious, can't wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter! I like the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru!
lovely, simply lovely. i love how you are slowly introducing kagome's strength by using sesshomaru. so many people simply throw out her "enormous" power in one swift move. i like to draw it out. good job.
FL
The story is getting better and better! Some chapters are so fun, and the storyline is really original and interesting. I can't wait for more chapters!
Amanda (Chapter 13) - Mon 28 Jul 2008
I love this chapter.
You always leave me waiting and hoping for what comes next.
very interesting. i can't wait to see where you take this. :D and you've got Shiori too! she's too cute, i like her. :D
FL
Wow!! This is a great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it! Wow! I'm not sure what's going to happen, this story is not close to being predictable, I LOVE IT! It has me guessing, well, actually not I gave up on guessing a few chaps back, I'm just enjoying it as I go. I can't wait to read what that last bit between Kikyo and Kagome was about, I may have an idea, The voice that Kagome hears may be the missing part of her soul singing about coming home. I can't wait for more, great, excellent, unique, awesome, OMG good! Narku, is completly psycho! Not normal psycho but silent, creepy psycho! Like don't mess with me right now psycho! Awesome version of him. I love your Narku! I really like your Sessy, I really thought the part where he wished Kagome would stop talking, when she did he kinda changed his mind. Love it, it was cute. I thought that Kagome would be totally healed, great twist! I don't get the well thing though, about her magic swirling with the wells, what ever, but did she unknowingly seal the well to save her family during the attack with Narku and Charlotte? I'm ready for more! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
Amanda (Chapter 12) - Sun 27 Jul 2008
I must say that I truly enjoy this story. I know that I cannot wait to read the end but that I will also be sad for this story to end. I am, however, beginning to wonder~ when will Sesshomaru and Kagome's relationship pick up or progress? Or is this a continuous build up?
amanda (Chapter 10) - Fri 25 Jul 2008
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I love this story (:
oohh...naraku's gone deviously nuts. i mean, he was always devious and always nuts, but now he's deviously nuts. lol. more please!!
awww! that's so sad. poor kagome, ripped from her home and cracking her spine at the same time (no pun intended). well, i can't wait to see how this will go.
FL
interesting. i wonder what crap naraku is up to now. poor inu, tho, wanting to be killed by so many simply because he's next in line. that's such a trite and realistic thing. *sigh* it's such a pity sess can't really get along with inu. oh well, tis life. can't wait for more.
FL
tina (Chapter 7) - Tue 22 Jul 2008
this latest chapter is very difficult to read most of it goes off the page so you can not see the whole sentences
tina (Chapter 6) - Mon 21 Jul 2008
wow I was in tears !! now my husband thinks I'm insane lol this is a heck of a chapter
aww, that's rather sad. i like it tho and i can't wait for more. ;D
FL
Athemea (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 Jun 2008
Very Very well written. I can not wait to find out more.
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