That was a beautiful chapter! I loved every single part of it and I think it was tastefully done! I look forward to the next chapter! Thank you so much for writing & sharing!
Let me just say wow. Okay? Just wow. That was a great chapter! The 'lemon' scenes I read on here/ff.net/mediaminer (yes I'm a hardcore ff reader-not just 'lemons', mind you lol) are not always A. gracefully done and B. don't always involve all aspects of what a 'lemon' entails, such as emotions. Without rough or crude phrases you've managed to convey something deeper than just a quick f**k. I liked the emotional aspect you included.
But holy mother of fanfiction the suspense was killing me! I've been with you since around chapter nine, I'm pretty sure. This is my Sess/Kag favorite fanfiction of all time! :)
I appreciate the plot twists you add, and the depth of character you put into every character that has some sort of role, even the side characters. I feel like I know them as well as myself at times.
In fact, I started a favorites folder on my computer to add my favorite fanfics onto. You are the second one I added, and the first one was complete, so you are the first one I check. I don't check them all every day, but yours, I do. Oh, and I'm not trying to pressure you or anything because as an author myself, I understand that it takes time to write something well. And if your muse suddenly abandons ship and goes to the Bahamas, there's nothing you can do about it! (By the way, I should never have started that sentence with 'and'. I'm going to writer's hell! Save me!"
Now that I've written a novel, I'd like to finish with a closing remark.
A short one.
Your portrayal of Kagome and Sesshomaru are the best. Ever.
The end!
A/N: Thanks so much for reading! Hope you enjoyed.
You know, maybe it's time I get a Dokuga account. Oh wait, I just did! I'm a complete newbie. Haven't even gotten my confirmation e-mail yet. I'm so excited it's ridiculous.
Damn that was hot Amber!! I loved it! It was about time. I could just imagine Sess' face when he caught on to what she wanted. I'm sure his mind flashed then went blank and the only thing that registered was that he was about to do it big!!! LOL! Thanks for the update!
omg that was freaking hot. @_@ you always write such hot lemons!
Alisha (Chapter 54) - Wed 28 Jul 2010
Oh my...no words! That was amazing! Absolutely fantastic! I can barely wait for this fic to continue... :)
Absolutely brilliant!!! I love it! You can feel them coming together body and soul through this. They needed this, screw the other reasons, they needed this coupling from themselves, and it was just brilliant!
Please update soon. :)
--Gothic Lust
WOW!!! What a wonderful, romantic and erotic chapter. I loved it. 'sighs' To Be Kagome for just a few minutes 'Eyes getting that far away daydreaming look and misty anime style' A girl can only dream.
TKE (Chapter 54) - Tue 27 Jul 2010
OMG, OMG, OMG!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!
Umm....WOW. That was really intense. Phew! Now I need a shower after that one.
Keep 'em coming!
Shay (Chapter 54) - Tue 27 Jul 2010
OH MY GOD. I definately need a cold shower after that. Whew. If you have difficulty with lemons it certainly isn't noticeable. Glad to have them finally mated, and that last line gave me a little laugh. Excellent chapter and cannot wait for more. This is actually one of my favourite stories to read and am going to be reading the whole thing over again right now (oh the joys of isomnia). 10/10.
HUAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ....... ahem........ sorry..... the last sentence made me laugh maniacly and i thought the i should put it in the review.... >_>..... ANYWAYS!!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY they're gonna KICK SOME ASS! (eventually)
Anonymous (Chapter 54) - Tue 27 Jul 2010
Nice chapter and very naughty, and forgive me for nit-picking, but you called Sesshoumaru's sword tokujin when in the other chapters you clearly said that he was using bakusaiga at that point, so Tokujin should be broken by now. Just thought to let you know.
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