I really love this story... it is one of the few that takes place after Naraku's defeat where Kagome lives in the Feudal Era. It was not what I was expecting but I think that's a good thing. Could you do fanart of what Kagome looks like now with her transformation? I look forward to seeing if Seshou can learn to love and make Kagome fall for him. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
please updata it was really nice
This is going to be one story I am going to be looking foreward to!!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Great story! I can't wait to read more!
I like the changes you made in Kagome, going to be fascinating to watch her learn about her new body. Also like the reasoning behind Sesshoumaru calling her 'woman'.
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So bloody sad about Shippo, though it does fit with the story line. Interesting changes seems to be happening to Kagome. Good story!
I like how you did Sesshoumaru's being a bit second guessing himself about Kagome. The spring-healer is a nice touch, though I would have thought Kagome would have acted a bit more shocked at finding a slug like creature on her leg.
You really doing a good job with the angst in this story... interesting what Sesshoumaru is doing.
Interesting chapter and good workon how you wrote both Kagome's reaction to not being able to go back and Sesshoumaru reaction to this.
BTW... is Shippou dead to?
You did the sex scene very tastefully... good work.
A great and heartwrenching beginning. Wonderful work on capturing Kagome's feelings. I'm thinking Shippou didn't make it either... :(
Heh heh heh, Sesshy's little buddy's interest has been piqued by something? Or am I totally off-base here?
I liked this chapter if it wasn't a bit annoying to have it be left off where it was *glares* I know you did that on purpose *blows rasberry*
I'm curious as to the effect of the springhealer on Kags, so I'm probably going to be waiting quite impatiently on the next release. Nice chapter, and, with al due respect, hurry the hell up and write me another one :p .......sorry you had to see-hear that. SAT studying....it's getting to me ...
i love ur story .. tho im still waitin' 4 the juicy details hehe :P .. take ur time since u have children .. BUT PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON .. btw i like the idea of ur story ..
i find the other stories do have the whole marking thing if you want a good excuse as to why InuYasha did nto mark Kagome go with his human heat or blood he is a half demon so it would work. Other wise I am enjoying what you have update soon.
Nothing was said about Inuyasha marking her. Why didn't he since he supposedly loved her and wanted her to stay with him? Also, you said nothing about Shippo. He was important to her, like an adopted son, so did he die or what? Also, has the disease run it's course and disappeared so that when she finally learns to love Sesshoumaru and gets pregnant with his pup, it will survive? It could be any of his pups would survive because of them being strong like their father. It seems I'm full of questions.
hi!i am really fascinated by ur story!keep up the good work!:d there's only 1 thing that is bugging me. in the last line of chapter 5 u wrote "two human girls, a two-headed dragon, an imp and a demon lord" but arent ah-un n jaken dead?
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