Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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Sammi-Chan (Chapter 87) - Mon 07 Feb 2011

OMG you and your cliffys i swear im going to just jump off one! and pull the next straight out of your amazing imagination! i cant wait 2 read the next chp. love this thank you but im going to go sulk in a corner till the next chap.... ty...


Ashes (Chapter 87) - Mon 07 Feb 2011

I absolutely LOVE Hisoka-sensei. Also, you've done such a great job getting across Sesshoumaru's emotions without making him "emotional". Every time I read your fic I get a deep connection with the characters. It makes my day.


mary (Chapter 87) - Sun 06 Feb 2011

*dies due to too much excitement!*

 

let the courting wars begin!!


Loveyaa (Chapter 87) - Sun 06 Feb 2011

I must say I like the way this is going. I like that Kagome didn't come back and just transition the feelings from the cute little Sesshoumaru to romantic ones for the bigger Sesshoumaru. I really can't wait to see how things turn out now. The relationship between Sesshoumaru and Hisoka still is quite interesting and admirable (that they are still really close). I really enjoyed the way that you laid out this chapter. I wonder how many more things Kagome will bring from the past...the further past. I am on the edge of my seat for whose side Kagome chooses :)


sara (Chapter 87) - Sun 06 Feb 2011

I wish that Kagome would consider Sesshoumaru´s feelings for once and that you would let her mature. Sango is only one year older than her and I can´t see her acting like that. After everything that Kagome has seen, everything that she was forced to do you´d think she came to realize that she is not a little girl herself.

No one, not even Sesshoumaru expects that she will mate with him immediately but her being so skittish and afraid is really annoying. Sesshoumaru is her friend and he wouldn´t hurt her even if he is an adult now. Inuyasha became her bestfriend in a really short time why is it so hard to see Sesshoumaru as someone close to her, too? Didn´t it occur to her that Sesshoumaru hadn´t seen her for centuries but she is more concerned for her other friends who didn´t see her just for a few months. She is really not fair and needs to grow up.


naqaashi (Chapter 87) - Sun 06 Feb 2011

::cuddles you:: this chappie was made of pure d'awwwwww!


JessB (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

This story just brings me such joy.  The manner in which it is delivered and the subject matter flow so well.  Thank you for your talented and gifted writings!


L-desu (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

blissful reunion, and entincing mentionables to come.  me likies!


Excellent am in love with this story (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

Mara (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

Autumn (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

I can't wait to see Sesshomaru to woo Kagome!


Katlyn (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

Shame on you Kagome, for thinking blindly that he would do anything to hurt you and trying to run away so childishly. Despite your younger age, you have killed, you have fought, and you will continue to do so in a war setting. Things are as fluffy as you assume them to be.

Also, *gives her a good kick to the shin* Double standards brat! He's not considering your feelings you say? HA! You just got done thinking that he always does, but you don't consider his feelings at all. All you see is his intent. Practice what you say.

 

Okay I had to get that out of me lol Sometimes when she's being her self, i go crazy at her ditzy 'oh my feelings and not yours' self, especially when they aren't doing anything forward or wrong. He basically proposed, and she's freaking out and trying to run away. >_< Poor Sesshomaru! *HUGGLES HIM* lol its sad that he really doesn't understand any of her reasoning, but i'm sure once he understands what the hell she's talking about, he'll go and take care of it. The flash of the future says he will <3

 

Kagome is treating Shippou kinda like the way Sesshomaru got treated, thats so adorable! :D lol I love that she doesn't even realize the change of her 'affectionate actions'. I think its this addition was very realistic, that Kagome doesn't go back to all her old habits, because new ones have been formed over them. Tehe, even Miroku got to enjoy her affection!

 

I'm going to assume that any conversation after the point where we go to where inuyasha and hisako are, will be either not mentioned or flashedbacked for us. :) I"m curious to see how well Kagome will handle the situation now, with all of her friends returned to her. Also, i wonder about when Kagome goes home, or if she will at all till later. Such as how will Sesshomaru respond to her leaving like that after he just got her back, I can tell by the ending there that he wishes to continue to be close to her, that he misses that.

 

oh, interesting thought~! So kagome does go back to the future, greets her family, tells them whatever it is that she tells them, then at night, while in her bed all by her self, feels really lonely cuz she got use to sleeping with others near her. She goes to the well, thinking w/e her thoughts are -i'm vague cuz i don't want to just type up a whole scene for you to read like 'well that was nice...' lol- looking down the well. She decides impulsively or determinedly to just go over there for a moment, while internally knowing she's going there all ngiht. When she comes up, Sesshomaru is waiting at the well by him self, and helps her out. He asks why she has returned early, and she chews over what to say before telling him the truth- she couldn't sleep by her self, so far away. So our dear sesshomaru gets in some nice cuddle time like the last time, having Kagome all snuggled up in his lap to sleep, perhaps looking up at the stars, pointing out constellations? XD A happy rememberance of the past while being happy and comfortable with the new sesshomaru. :D

 

lol anyways, this chapter was a good bring back, now that all the characters are in frame again, things will get even more interesting! I haven't forgotten about Naraku, btw! :D


Hesunohana (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

ha ha ! they're planning something ! bad, very bad boys ! (laugh)

 

finally, the long awaited return...

great, as ever, and sweety (whan Kagome takes Shippo in her arms). I know I am going to love the next one.

 

so, see you next time.


WildcatYST (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

Yay! What a happy reunion! Now I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru will sway Kagome's feelings. Update again soon!


Firehauke (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

I have to say this is a great chapter!  That Kagome expresses such wonder over having her life extended upon completion of the mating mark is WONDERFUL!  Too many folks gloss over that and we never get to get an idea how she feels about that - I guess it's swept up in NRE (New Relationship Energy).

 

I have to wonder if Kagome's disappearance is the REAL reason Sesshomaru turned to 'ice' like he did.  Heh, I will have to experience all the chapters again to rediscover this.

 

Poor Yasha though, so confused about Kagome's attitudes to all these youkai.

 

I can't wait for the next installment! I always enjoy them.


Kara (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

YUS! Another chapter woot! I look forward to Fridays... mostly because of this fanfiction xD


Mandachu (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

So here I am, just finishing the chapter, at 12:32 AM in the morning and needless to say, my face hurts from smiling so much. I have to say that this chapter had me giggling like a schoolgirl and smiling and frowning along with the characters with in it. I look forward to so much more in the future and continously hope for more chapters to Imperceptible, which shall always be my most favorite!

 

Sincerely,

Mandachu


Manatee (Chapter 87) - Sat 05 Feb 2011

OMG *girly happy squeal*  What a wonderful chapter.  What we have all been waiting for, I'm sure.  Thank you for your time and dedication to this wonderful story.  As always it is greatly appreciated.


connie (Chapter 87) - Fri 04 Feb 2011

and so begins sesshoumaru's woo, ahaha ;)


Dana Daidouji (Chapter 87) - Fri 04 Feb 2011

After such a stressful week I am most glad to find that you have posted and update! I read it gredily and re-read it again to absorb everything. I think Hisoka-sensei is my favorite original character out of all that I have read. Superb characterizations and excellent story-telling. Keep up the great work!


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