Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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nogooddeed (Chapter 33) - Sat 06 Mar 2010

"I will permit it" my favorite line!! Please update soon!


Sena (Chapter 33) - Sat 06 Mar 2010

Really enjoyable! I was wondering if you even plan to finish the story or just have drabbles into infinity, not that either one is a problem, I'm just very curious! I also am enjoying how you are showing Sesshomaru's childhood, its really interesting and very believable. Looking forward to more <3


Addy (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

:D  So cute!  As always, I look forward to the next chapter.


GreyEcho (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

aw... that was kinda sweet. the whole friends thing. Sucks that he has to have such rough training.


mary (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

the challenge was mean man! we want more words. :(( why dokuga? WHY?


MiHonoKo (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

That is officaly the cutest thing ever!


Tilayha (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

This story is like "Chicken Soup For The Soul." It never fails to brighten my day! Keep up the GREAT work!!

 

Tilayha


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

"i will permit it" *giggles* such a cute pup.


Vanja (Chapter 33) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

I am absolutely in love with little Sesshoumaru. He is soo full of possibilities. He has got many feelings that I can beleve he could have when he was little. He is vibrant and so much alive. I can't wait for more. I am really curious how this story will end.

I like how Inu no Taisho does not like humans yet. I wonder if he will start to like them because of Kagome.

Great work

I am waiting for more :)


Elifina (Chapter 32) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

another great chapter!


Snowfall (Chapter 32) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

That was so sad.  *sniffle*  Kagome must be really feeling alone.  The men were a little entertaining, though.


Lady Kirara (Chapter 32) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

I really have to say. I've always been a fan of your writing, but this story is so unlike your others. Its simply amazing. Not to say your others are not, because they are. I guess this one really shows a side of the characters that no one really knows. =) This chapter was absolutely my favorite. Maybe I'm a little sentimental, but I was glad Kags finally got to say something out loud about her futuristic past. Even if it is someone who can't talk back. Simply fantastic. I can't wait to read more.


Lexie (Chapter 32) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

naaaw so sweet :) poor Ah and Un probably thought she didnt like them anymore the first time they greeted her but she'll do it properly the next time

please update!!


shinkonokokoro (Chapter 17) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

Dear goodness. I absolutely LOVE this child Sesshoumaru! He's SO adorable and you write his character brilliantly! As I read each chapter, I always find myself chuckling or giggling at something. I just wanted you to know that you weave the story together beautifully, and your characters and dialogue are quite vibrant and easy to read.


Sala (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

A wonderful, heart-felt chapter.


taixi (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

One more thing - I am shocked to realize it looks like I haven't left a review for this story before??? (I could have *sworn* I had, at least once before (I thought twice!), but I can't seem to find my prior reviews. Maybe it got deleted?) Anyhow just wanted to say I look forward to all of your updates with giddy anticipation, as always your chapters are delightful little vignettes with each word chosen with precision. A joy to read. And thanks for the riddle w the egg, it had me stumped until you provided the answer (I guess my brain needs some more exercise since I hadn't a clue).


Connie (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

awwh poor kagome :[ at least someone is able to recognize kagome's true feelings :/


taixi (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

Ah, a Tues evening update! You spoil us! Anyhow this entire time I've been wondering about whether Sesshoumaru will remember Kagome when he meets her again - it sounds like the answer is a likely yes, since Ah-Un remembers her. Hopefully he doesn't have too many abandonment issues from when she leaves (I really hope Kagome does make it home, for a while there I was wondering if she *was* Inuyasha's mother, but that would probably be just too contrived). 


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

That was adorable I almost cried in happiness FOR Kagome hehe :) wonderful work keep it up :) Im loving it :) ( dont ya just love Mc Donalds lmfao)


Addy (Chapter 32) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

Cute update, look forward to the next one. :D


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