Reviews for Unspoiled by forthright

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SessQueen (Chapter 65) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

My anticipation for when Kagome comes back is killing me. I can't wait to see what happens. You have a great writing skill.


Neva (Chapter 65) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

ooooooooooommmmmmmggggggg your 100 words teases me so!


BlueHeavensAngel (Chapter 65) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

I just love this story.  You always leave us in such suspense.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Excellent work as always.  :)


Ashley (Chapter 65) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

This story is one of the best i have read but i hve to say though after waiting for so long for an update only to get a couple words (100 words) its disheartening. I love it when u have full chapters and not something that can be read in less then a minute. Please consider posting a full chapter sometime soon. Keep up with this story and update soon, I am looking forwards to it and hopefully it is a full chapter with a 100+ words


Yohko (Chapter 65) - Fri 06 Aug 2010

I hope Kagome shows up soon! :D Such a cliffhanger. Hashope you update soon! :D


Hesunohana (Chapter 64) - Tue 03 Aug 2010

just too extraordinary !!! the so waited meeting is here !!!! (laugh and shouts) YEAH !! and Hisoka reveled so much and so few in the same time. i really LOVE it.

 

so, see you soon !


loveyaa (Chapter 64) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

I quite enjoyed not only the content of this chapter but the length as well. I like the way that you find a way to fit the chapter titles with the sections or the other way around. I like the way that Hisoka interacted with everybody and explained not only himself but everything. Some things were made clearer while some things were just faded more into mystery. Im now really looking forward to what happened to Kagome and why she left. Can't wait!!


Captain Lolo (Chapter 64) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

Wow what a great story!!! I love it oh so very much!


mary (Chapter 64) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

i can't believe the flip flops my stomach is doing right now! but i don't want it to stop. and that last image, of him flexing his claws, well...wow. there's so many little nuances here one just has to be in tune to fully appreciate them thank you doing such a great job!


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 64) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

Ok I admit this is going to make me sound utterly wako but I have to say you are driving me insane!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this fic but it seems to take forever (Which is a great thing) and it just keeps making me more and more ancious to read the next chapter!!!!  I really can't wait for Kagome to get back to the feudal era I really wanna see how her and Lord Sesshomaru would act around eachother!  AND I want to know what happened to Kagome soon PLEASE!  I've read every chapter atleast 10 times now (because I re-read the ENTIRE story everytime you update lol) and I can't seem to guess what possibly could happen! This story keeps me guessing and I love that so wonderful job I cant wait for yet another update! :) I LOVE IT YOU ROCK :) KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND TRY NOT TO DRIVE ME COPLETELY INSANE WITH WAITING EH? lol :P

 

Your Loyal Reader/Fan,

Never Let Them See You Cry

A.K.A.

Shannah Terry


Elifina (Chapter 64) - Sun 01 Aug 2010

*chokes on anticipation* ...cant...breath....


Music2miEars (Chapter 64) - Sun 01 Aug 2010

I always freak out (in the good way) when you post a new chapter up. You have an amazing writing style and capture each character's personality perfectly.


Banana (Chapter 64) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

Oh so many wonderful things about this. IY getting complimented= LOVE IT. He deserves it. I sometimes forget he really is a softy at heart that's been through a lot.

 


janjan (Chapter 64) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

heyyy Awsome couple of chapters!! Seriously cant wait till next chapter!!!!

 

 


Melly (Chapter 64) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

Now THAT was a nice long chapter.  I loved seeing the small talk again between Hisoka sensei and the other members of the Inu tachi before things got down to business.  You are very talented, however, with writing these frustrating cliffhangers... which is a great trait for the writer, but always makes me "Gah!" at the end of the chapter!  I can't wait until the next one and I loved this one very much!  The story keeps getting better and better... like crack. @_@


Discord-Maru (Chapter 64) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

I am loving this more and more with every chapter.


GreyEcho (Chapter 64) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

aw. ;_;

But 'yay!' that she may be coming back to their time~! I can't wait to see what happens. >.< Now I must keep myself busy before the suspence kills me. XD


Rowdys girl (Chapter 64) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

Very deep insights, emotionally taut, if this were a book, I would be skipping ahead to make sure everything comes out alright. Forthy, I would NEVER want to play poker with you... I can't afford to lose.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 64) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

DANGIT Forthy!!!! I'm gripping the edge of my seat here, omg that was AWESOME!!! I must know what happens!! *gives you bribery cookies* please oh please update as soon as you can!!!


Lauren (Chapter 64) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

I am reassured, yet mystified. It says a lot, I think, that Hisoka-sensei remembers so much about Sesshomaru (not only his favorite foods and dress, but when and what to comment on). You've created quite a character. The fanart is great too! Hisoka-sensei's so adorable! ^3^ I can't wait to see how his role will play out. Or should I say, how his role will continue; since we already know what he turns out to be.

It's good that Sesshomaru has, at least, begun resolving his issues with Hisoka-sensei. His willingness to both listen and remove his armor said as much. But who was it that took Kagome? And how did that translate into Hisoka-sensei not returning? Was he injured? Shamed? Did something happen that made it necessary for he to be the one that took Kagome? ...Guess we'll find out soon...

Thank you for including everyone in the introductions (however glossed-over they may have been). I know it was important to note not only Rin, but her attire and Jaken, but it was great of you to also include his "cousin" instead of focusing immediately upon Inuyasha and Shippo. *gives you a cookie*

So~ Another great chapter! Better yet, it was the best kind - one with lots of information. ^o^ Hazzah! Hope all's well on your side of the computer. I impatiently await the next installment~

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl


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