AAaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! Kikyo! Okay, so i actually did tear up reading that last chapter, i cant wait to read the next Alpha Pack Mates fic! (I can already tell ima stay up WAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY to late reading it lol
Karli (Chapter 10) - Mon 16 Jan 2012
that was great i am going to try and find your third and final branch off to this seiries
demon (Chapter 10) - Sun 22 May 2011
are you going to make a 3rd book? you can't leave it at a cliffhanger. how does kagome mate with sesshoumaru? does his heir trust him?
i think i read and re-read the last couple of lines of this chapter at least 10 times going "wtf". this is an interesting plot twist and i am literally on my toes in anticipation.....can't wait to get to the next chapter. as always keep up the good work.
finally some one who knows Kagomes eyes are actually brown heck if they are any other color they are green very cute I like the story good job!! =3
I loved it! I was slightly disappointed that it wasn't as long as the first, but you did forewarn us that it wasn't going to be. I loved the wish and I can't wait to read what happens in the next installment!
AWWW!!!! So sweet what Kagome did for Kikyou!!!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 10) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
another great story keep up the great work ^_^
(Chapter 10) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
The scene between Kagome and Ayumi was really moving, awesome work in capturing and getting across the powerful emotions.
Wispr
(Chapter 9) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Like how you did the disagreement between Kagome and Sesshoumaru and how thing got things iron out.
Wispr
(Chapter 8) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Now that was to bloody cute! Curious why the pup didn't want to play with Rin.
Wispr
(Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Great work with detailing the nice day for the pack... gives the reader a sense of normalcy.
Wispr
(Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Nice work with how you wrote the pack's reaction to the thought of Kagome and Sesshoumaru being together... very realistic.
Wispr
(Chapter 5) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
I really like stories such as yours that paint a realistic pack/family group. Awesome job in creating such a mother/father atmoshpere between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Bloody great writing!
Wispr
(Chapter 4) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Wonderful work with how you did the wedding... simply love both Kagome's mating gift and the scene between her and Kikyou.
Wispr
(Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Sesshoumaru's and Kagome's actions in this chapter was believable with how you have wrote them getting to know one another. Good work!
Wispr
(Chapter 2) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Really like the history you created for the pup... again a plausible reason for him to stick around.
Wispr
(Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
I like how thye are settling down and the ending was a bloody bomb shell!
Wispr
another masterpiece. although short, this was another great story. Awesome job Hairann. Not many people can do a series, but yours is coming along great.
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