LMFAO! OMG! I love this story. I really needed that! Wonderful Miss Kagura!
This just has to be one of the most wonderfully comedic stories I have ever had the opportunity to read. I am very glad that you chose to take up the challenge and produce this wonderful piece. Although the title of the work gives a little insight as to what might happen, it completely shows its comedic side as you read along. From the soft scene in the hot springs, till the little dastardly mokomoko shows up, it gives you cramps from laughing so much.
Your writing style flows from each emotion in each scene so perfectly that you do not notice a shift in mood so drastically, it does not throw you off. Inadverdantly, it keeps you enthralled so much that you find yourself suddenly at the end of a chapter and you mourn the fact that another update has not been posted. Please keep up the outstanding work, and do not let any negative criticism, flames, or horrible words deter you from continuing this completely hilarious and comedic work of art.
| Aww noes K+S lemonz? Booz.
I guess I have to settlze for the MokoMoko limez?
oksana (Chapter 12) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
Great story to read after whole day of work:D
| LMAO. This has gotta be an all time low for mokomoko. Beaten by a "lesser canine" LOL Ayame with preganacy cravings XD Great Chapter. Ohhhhh... Miroku and Shippo are in for it now. Mokomoko was nearly eaten. It was even nibbled.
| LOL Shippo convinced Mokomoko that Inuyasha is into guys? XD One of these days Mokomoko is gonnaget into alot of trouble. I think it might be with Kagome's mum...
| >.< Ouch splinters... I wonder what those mokomoko's are up to next. Wow Mokomoko eat mokomoko eat world o.O
Okay , so he took her virginity but neither one really got to enjoy it - he has gratified her to placate her ...is he ever going to catch a break? This stuff is so very hilarious! I could mentally picture MokoMoko being shaved and prepped for dinner!! Please , oh gods PLEASE update soon! I am dying to read more !!
| ROLF! Poor Mokomoko... I can't help but feel sorry for him. I actually though he was going to be eaten... then I thought better because you can't kill off Mokomoko, he's the one pretty much making this story. His desire for his cleaver is priceless. I can't wait for more.
Yay! He got to make up for his lack of sexual prowess XD
Mokomoko sooooo had that coming! Grilled mokomoko, mmmmm...scrumptious.
| Moko gets eaten....almost. Nice! Maybe he'll slow down a little? NOT! I know you have something good planned for him. Thanks for the update!
MLMonty (Chapter 12) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
God this story has so many LOL moments. It's great!
lmao! a bald mokomoko! hahaha and mokomoma abandoned him hahahahahahaha!
Mokomoko best be thankful to Sesshomaru for that bit! LMAO! He was almost ookami munchies!
katlady (Chapter 12) - Sat 13 Jun 2009
:giggles:: thats funnnnnnnyyy
Hahahahaha! Poor mokomoko! "Mokomoko realized that Mokomama had abandoned him to raise the offspring...again." Looking forward to future of Sesshomaru and Kagome now that they have had a successful romp ... will mokomoko get his grandpups since he bewitched Kagome's birth control? :)
| ha ha! I love how even after the cute act she still wanted to eat him. XD
| lol The last few chapters were just twisted and Awesome!
| lol The last few chapters were just twisted and Awesome!
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