I HOPE SHE NEVER FORGIVES HIM!!!! I hope sessomaru ends up old, homely, alone, screaming kagome's name into the distance while she marries someone else and mockes him silently!
You have no idea how completely happy I am that you put this story on Dokuga.......I love'd it so so much when I read it a few years back, This story actually drew me into fanfiction...So thankyou so much....And don't worry making Sesshoumaru a jerk puts more into the fic...making you think..'oh no what if they don't get together?' hahahaha I love the fic and you can know that I have it as a favorite along with you. :D
I have to say, I haven't laughed this much in a LONG time over the interactions between Kagome and Sesshoumaru! You did an absolutely wonderful job with her spunky attitude and it was so...original! At points, I could just SEE theses scenes playing out in my head and it led to many giggling moments and many confused stares of the people around me as I bust out laughing at my psp (which is where I read most of it from while out and about) when they thought I was playing a game. My favorite moment was KAGOME OF THE DISCOVERY CHANNEL! I have dubbed her so and therefore she shall be!! ... well, at least in my mind, lol!I adored how you made Naraku's character! I have NEVER seen him in that type of role with that sort of personality. I usually hate him because he's beeing skeezy most the time...I hope you put a spin on his charrie in future fics as well!Sesshoumaru...boy, did I want to thoroughly THROTTLE him for what he did to poor Kagome! You BASTARD! *whaps him with a wet pool noodle* BAD DOG!I guess I can't stay mad at him too long, because the ending made me smile.As for criticism...well, there are spelling errors like in one chapters you say something about Kagome's root when you mean route. Nothing major at all, I knew what you meant and I know all that read knew it too. It certainly didn't take back from my enjoyment of this piece.Ummm...I think thats all of the Constructive Crit I can give...I was too amused to care about much else. No one is perfect and no matter how often you look over your own work, something will always slip through whether it be while typing it out, or going through and trying to proof read/beta it.Awesome and wonderful job and I hope I get a chance to read more of your work. It was a pleasure reviewing this one!*tosses plushies and chocolates*Ezzie
Liked is a gross understatement. I adored it... and covet it still in my list of favoites *grins*. I'll come back later to read it again when there's a lull in works :p
No, Really this was fantastic. Made me forget all this happened in the span of a week until I rememberd chapter titles. :3 You've done an awesome job with it, and this has to be one of my favorite ending yet. Kagome's so playful and mentally unstable in this and it was adorable how she dragged him down to her mischievous level (I was waiting on her to mess with his palm pilot for the whole damn show....nada *pouts*). ;3 Usually I hate it when they jsut do a forward skip and have it be all happy la la , but yours was funny and it didn't miss a beat or feel out of place . Thanks for the treat, I'm looking forward to more delicacies you may offer in the future. Hopefully.*puppy dog eyes*. ...........I'm not trying to be subtle or coy, write me more stories damnit!
Thank You Kat~!
I'm still ticked at Sesshoumaru....I don't think he payed enough....such a hypocrite too. Getting mad at Kikyo and the mutilator when he was a cruel bag of bitch as well...Oh well, I'm assuming with her personality she made payback a veritable bitch *grins*
Rex
omg this was hilarious to read, i especially love the part where Kagome's cruising around on the scooter with everyone's stuff. Anbolutely rich with humor! Great Job!
I like this story!! It's very good. and now it's way past my bed time seeing as I have to get up in a couple of hours for work.
Ja Ne,
I.S.
I have to say... this is the first time that I've read a fic where someone has been able to portray Kagome as a crazy assistant to the great Sesshoumaru. I love all the pranks that the do to each other and the playful banter. I look forward to all the mischief that Kagome will pull on Sesshou to drive him nuts. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
I absolutely love this story!!
It was hilariously funny, Kagome was crazy in this and i could not stop from laughing my ass off!!LOL
And it was sooooo sad when Sesshomaru was being an ass to her, and then when he hit her OMG!
But i liked the happy ending, thank you so much for a wonderful story!!!
You just made my nite... so I found this fic while taking a break from studying for finals... Never thought hacking could be an interesting topic for a fic. I love how Kagome drives Sesshoumaru crazy. I wonder when she'll test her hacking skills on him? Keep up the good work :P
YES! Finally! I LOVE this story! I cannot wait for My Pet to come either! I shall have to read this and leave reviews in a little bit.. >:D
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